2007年12月21日 星期五
Taekwondo Competition
There is a taekwondo competition will be held in the morning tomorrow. To attend the contest, my boyfriend practice after school everyday. He sometimes asked me to accompany with him, but it was a little boring. I didn’t want to waste time, so I read my book or wrote diary till he finished his training. He hopes me go to see this performance on the spot, but I have to go home. Therefore, I will encourage him and tell him must have confidence to face the contest before he sets out. I think that he will be pleased at the moment. I pray that he will win the contest and get a large reward.
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The first sentence is too existential. Instead, you should say "My boyfriend has a taekwando competition tomorrow morning" because this is much more specific and on topic.
It should be "my boyfriend practices after school every day".
"He sometimes asks me to accompany him, but it is a little boring" is what you should say. That's because it sounds as if you are describing something you habitually (as a rule; generally) feel, in which case, the simple present is appropriate.
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